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A World Of Glass
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 06:34:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A world of glass
Fragil and free
so easy to see
so easy to envy...
A world of glass
Cracking under the strain
Of years of neglect
Anger and Pain
A world of glass
shattered and felled
Shards of Life
Trying to rebuild
A world of glass
Build up a new
Shards of the old world
Embedded in the new....
Copyright ©
MysticFireFairy
... [
2004-10-01 18:34:31]
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Re: A World Of Glass
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by Yousef on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 07:32:47 PM AEST
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| Good idea, simple words and good effort, may be it's not very well written but try harder and the next time will be much better. |
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Re: A World Of Glass
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 08:27:28 PM AEST
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| brilliant write. amazing. i loved this. excellent style and well presented piece. =] |
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Re: A World Of Glass
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by nintool3369 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 08:45:10 PM AEST
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| i feel like that there should've been more too this but i think that's what was to be conveyed at the end of it but it didn't leave me hanging...i like it ...good ***** |
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Re: A World Of Glass
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by Hoots on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 08:11:57 PM AEST
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It was alright....I think maybe if you elaborated a little bit more it would have been a lot better. Keep practicing and you'll be an amazing poet.
Krystle |
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