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Her
Contributed by
scott23432
on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can’t seem to get her out of my mind.
All I can think about is they way she looks,
Beautiful, warm, sweet.
How I love to talk to her and just to be with her..
how minutes with her can make a week brighter...
But so see that she is just out of reach......
Far enough that I cant reach her...
I want so badly to be with her and to hold her.
to kiss and to hug her..
To lay beside her and to whisper
How much I love her.
But for now.. all I can do is dream of her.
I hope and pray that she loves me the way I love her
All I can do is love her. Always and forever.
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scott23432
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2002-11-12 17:00:00]
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Re: Her
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 12:53:01 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful about the one you love.Christina |
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Re: Her
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 03:24:58 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful expression
of your love for her, i enjoyed reading
this one, Thanks for sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Her
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by alternachik29 on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 09:41:25 AM AEST
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omg scottie-2-hottie! I hate it! NOT!! - oh, man, i totally had you going didn't i? no? oh...ok... anyways, i love it!!! and i know who it's about!!! anyways, some productive criticism... maybe you should try not to repeat yourself so much. just suggestion, otherwise i think it's great!
love ya always scottish,
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Re: Her
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:05:16 AM AEST
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| beautiful work :*) |
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Re: Her
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by Lady_Bubbles420 on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 09:17:46 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem scott! Keep up the good work. |
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