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Wheres The Trust?
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 06:30:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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A friends Betrayl
Promises unkept
Anger & Pain
Hatred & Despise
Memories thrown away
Light is fading...
Darkness comes
Shadows Lurking
Voices Heard
Tears sheding
Wheres the trust?
No friend No Trust!
Copyright ©
MysticFireFairy
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2004-10-01 18:30:28]
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Re: Wheres The Trust?
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by Yousef on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 07:37:02 PM AEST
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| I know that the topic is anger, and I felt that in the words, but with more practicing and more writing you will do much better. |
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Re: Wheres The Trust?
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 08:29:50 PM AEST
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| trust is important, but not many people have it in them to be trustworthy. very nice poem, the capitalization is not constant and is distracting though. |
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Re: Wheres The Trust?
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:27:00 PM AEST
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| aw, made me sad, because everyone lies to me a lot, and i feel the same way. it seems we are a lot alike. i always believe i have no friends, i can relate to this. good job. |
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