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Pain
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brokenbylove130
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Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 05:43:43 PM in AEST
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When i look into your eyes
i can see how bad your hurting
if i could i swear id take it all away.
i only want to save you
You are so much of the joy in my life
that it kills me when i see you in pain.
one day ill find a way
to save you from yourself.
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Re: Pain
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by greeneyes on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 09:40:55 PM AEST
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Great write, I hope you can help your friend.
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Re: Pain
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 06:36:34 PM AEST
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Giving someone the support necessary to save themselves is often more productive as it is a lesson learned and hopefully remembered. ( just a thought ). There is a great devotoin to your freindship showing through this write ... one that hopefully is there for some time.
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Re: Pain
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 02:09:52 PM AEST
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The pain you feel yourself in this upsetting scenario is very apparant.
So too is your unfaltering devotion to make good their plight......
A truly commendable and inspiring write x
Star x x x |
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