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Cuerpo de Mujer
Contributed by
greasefire
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Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Cuerpo de Mujer
The tobacco-stained sky above
the sequined silence of love
It makes me wonder what
makes your lips quiver like that
Tiny tremors on smooth skin
Silky ripples, windy pond
Branches shudder, leaves fall in
Close your eyes. Let fall begin
Long, neatly folded arms
A soft-round crease it charms
Fingers to flutter over flesh
A nail to slide under the mesh
Protruding line that splits your back
Rounded rocks in shallow water
When we dance I rest my hand
Where oceans lap against slow hills
Lock my eyes, let me peer in
Deep dark wells throw nothing in
Lay down with satisfied sighs
And let me rest within your thighs
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greasefire
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2004-10-01 16:25:00]
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Re: Cuerpo de Mujer
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by theMoth on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:50:58 PM AEST
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Hey, I have no idea what a
cuerpo de mujer is, but
I really liked this. Good choice
of words and images.
It just got better and better.
Groovy.
--Mothy |
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Re: Cuerpo de Mujer
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by carmen_queasy on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 05:00:57 PM AEST
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| I like this poem, it's so majorly intense. |
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Re: Cuerpo de Mujer
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by a_bear on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 07:22:38 PM AEST
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hmmm...don't know what to say really. I liked it..just don't know what to say. I don't quite understand it all..
I try to get the metaphors and they don't come to me..maybe I'm slow (maybe?) or maybe you need to be a man?...but I'm commenting so that's something and I know what resting between the thighs is..lol. figured that out. If you ever write me a poem (like that'll happen..lol) ya know you need to be blunt. ) rotfl) |
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Re: Cuerpo de Mujer
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 08:36:52 PM AEST
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| well i liked the whole expect to read a spanish poem and find out only the title was spanish and said body of woman. ::shrugs:: oh well, good write. |
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Re: Cuerpo de Mujer
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by evilcherry312 on
Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 10:20:30 AM AEST
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| I don't know how the other person didn't understand the metaphors. I have never read a woman's body and the physical love between two people described so vividly and beautifully. The intricate detail you used was amazing. Excellent, excellent. |
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