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How can I love when its taken from me
Contributed by
silentshadow
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Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:01:17 PM in AEST
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Here I sit.,all lost and confused
The one who told , I guess they used
They told ,so mush one was to beleive
But, then it was gone , and no one to retrieve
They come and said
They needed so much
I gave and gave, and did not require, such
To the one I put in my whole hearted soul
Gave me not, one but all to be untold
What do you do?! When you are loved in a sense
But to give and give, and then make a repense
You ask, your heart thats true
Why did, this one make me so blue?
I want this one so bad, it tears me apart
And the one, Did take the heart
Why does love hurt one so much
No one knows the unloving touch
I love and want that it hurts so much.....but why give , what is not in touch?!
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Re: How can I love when its taken from me
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by carmen_queasy on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:40:45 PM AEST
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| thats a pretty poem. it flows really well :) |
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Re: How can I love when its taken from me
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by theMoth on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 05:27:30 PM AEST
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What you write about
seems to happen to us all.
People are bad,
but you have to try to believe in love.
It ain't easy.
But what else you gonna do.
I like this, I hope more will read it.
--mothy |
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