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Im falling... should i let go?
Contributed by
brokensoul
on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 02:03:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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im falling
but not quite yet to the bottom
should i let go
i cant let him hurt me
i cant take the aggravation any more!
no more broken hearts!
no more wounds that wont heal!
i cant do it anymore
i cant fall for him
if he hurts me
oh if he hurts me...
no more
No More
No MoRe
nO mOrE
NO MORE!!!!!!!
i have to break out of this skin
i cant do this
i just cant do this
but i dont want to hurt him
no one has ever treated me like this
giving me whatever i want
although i try to return the favor
carrying my things
keeping my mood high
just
dare i say it
loving me
NO!
i cant
i just cant
not again
not again
my emotions are out of control
im always flirting with others when hes not around
trying to tame my emotions
you know
but i cant
why cant i tame my emotions?
WHY?
its not fair
not fair at all
but maybe if i take this oppurtunity...
no
i cant
i think i should let go
but i cant do that either
im so weak
so so weak
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2004-10-01 14:03:39]
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Re: Im falling... should i let go?
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by blackholesun on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 02:42:45 PM AEST
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| how sad& frustrating,i too have felt that way.me and my man struggle too stay strong in love! |
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Re: Im falling... should i let go?
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 03:13:03 PM AEST
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deeply emotional write hope all turns out well for you
Michelle |
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Re: Im falling... should i let go?
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by Willofree on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:43:20 PM AEST
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Very emotional read. The problem is making a decision. If you can't let go because y ou can't' stand to hurt him, then you create a double-bind for yourself. Your end up taking care of someone at the expense of yourself.
You have a right to your own happiness; and if you can't say no, your yes becomes meaningless. I hope you take care of your self; and he is an adult who should do the same.
Good luck , Willofree |
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Re: Im falling... should i let go?
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 08:46:41 PM AEST
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| being hurt is as natural as the sun setting everyday, you cant avoid it. |
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