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My Soul
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
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Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 06:28:18 AM in AEST
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You opened your eyes
And saw into my soul
Desolate, empty, and smothered in lies
My heart barely beating
Charred, broken, and black
You saw into my twisted mind
Fragile but still cracked
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2004-10-01 06:28:18]
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Re: My Soul
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 08:08:07 AM AEST
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| aweeeeeeeeee... what a write... liked it... sandy |
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Re: My Soul
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 02:30:21 PM AEST
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great write, would have liked it to be longer, i was really into it then it was over lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Soul
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 09:15:19 PM AEST
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| amazing. |
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Re: My Soul
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 02:22:40 AM AEST
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This is written with such
depth and feeling excellent
work.
wildejohnny. |
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