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My Last Eclipse

Contributed by andthefoolshallburn on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:08:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Your eyes, suffocate. Your eyes, eclipse.

I can't find a way to forget you. In every detail, I hear your name. The sun grows darker as the red fills my eyes, and I can only feel vibrations coursing through my lungs.

And I die, lost in myself. Still you say there's something left. But what can be found in this red-tinted darkness that fills my dreams?

I can't see this. I don't know what you said. The words tend to blur in the perfection the red represents. I guess that this eclipse could be my last.

When you told me to dig my own grave, that I was holding too close to see the light, you laughed. You just smiled and let that eclipse carry you away.

I can't see through this, so let me die now. Between the sun dying out and the planets against me, I can' see out.

Your eyes, eclipse.

Copyright © andthefoolshallburn ... [ 2004-09-30 22:08:19]
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Re: My Last Eclipse (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:17:08 PM AEST
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excellent write. "And I die, lost in myself. Still you say there's something left. But what can be found in this red-tinted darkness that fills my dreams?" great stanza =]

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