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Knife
Contributed by
MiSS_B
on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:54:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the knife craves my skin
making blood run down
i've found the vein
the blood keeps flowing
like a waterfall
im enjoying this
its making my pain stop
my mind pays attention to that more
then my own mind problems
soon my arm will look like bars
only to be replaced by blood
soon i will get suffocated of my arm
and move on to another place to surrender
well known to be my thights
or even leg
but i will
i have carved the word " h-e-l-p "
in my leg before
no diffrence now
my arm is numb i only feel scars
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MiSS_B
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2004-09-30 21:54:56]
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Re: Knife
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by aallmmhh on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:00:34 PM AEST
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| wow..........you know, i get the same way. thats why we get along so well i think. |
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Re: Knife
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 10:23:04 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Knife
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:16:59 PM AEST
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| it seems to b the only thing to get the pain away..exclent poem |
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