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Peaceful in your arms
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I was standing on that street
did you feel how my heart could beat?
Grace and innocence
and lost purity in your hands
in your skin
I think there was me
I think there was time
to explain what became mine
with an only,brief look
and a glad,joyful you,
I just stood beside my one
in the light of the latest sun.
I felt peaceful in your arms
nothing seemed to be so far,
so impossible to reach
like a cold and empty beach...
"On that shore
we could make love
but now we're here
and all we've got
is some delicate minutes,
fragile flowers,
concrete fortune."
I felt peaceful in your arms
nothing could tear us apart.
I felt peaceful in your eyes
even if I tried to make them mine.
I felt love,drowned in your kiss
that's not a dream,
but what now I miss,
and I felt sorrow
when I left
cause you stole my virgin breath.
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LostDream
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2002-11-12 12:30:00]
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Re: Peaceful in your arms
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 01:02:41 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem! I realy enjoyed reading this.Christina |
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Re: Peaceful in your arms
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 01:52:35 PM AEST
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I love that ending where it says
cause you stole my virgin breath,
that was so beautiful, I really enjoyed
reading this one, Thanks for sharing
it with us, and Welcome to YPDC
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Peaceful in your arms
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by LostDream on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 02:53:18 AM AEST
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thank you christina!
I am very glad about that,even because I am an italian girl,so I can't speak english as well as an english girl... Moreover I'm quite young,just 17 :-) did you write any poems too in this site?bye |
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Re: Peaceful in your arms
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by LostDream on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 02:59:31 AM AEST
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Thank you so much!
I am really glad about what you said of the poem...did you write anything on this site?bye and thanx again! |
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