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Wretched Conciousness
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
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Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 04:04:00 PM in AEST
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Awake
Into unconciousness
This wretched conciousness
Of this world
Of hate crimes
And all the times
You just sat and watched
Knowing you should do something
But, you've done enough
So just sit and watch
Women getting degraded and disrespected
Hearing your friends call them whores
While inwardly telling yourself that you aren't like them
Everyone knows that the deepest pits of Hell
Are reserved for those who did nothing
So change
Do something, speak out
Awake
Into this beautiful coma
This perfect...dream...?
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2004-09-30 16:04:00]
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Re: Wretched Conciousness
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by poetmarie on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 04:10:35 PM AEST
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| I like it. Strong statement. And that about the deepest parts of heel reserved for those who do nithing -like that. |
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Re: Wretched Conciousness
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 05:47:21 PM AEST
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| mason this awesome, i am stealing that line...beautiful coma, i wanna use it in a poem, ok. |
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Re: Wretched Conciousness
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 05:55:19 PM AEST
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I'll have to read more of your stuff.
It interests me.
--Mothy |
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