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Untouchable
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:04:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I see you everyday in a world of your own,
Ignoring everything around you, all alone,
I feel the need to help you and make you realize,
That there's more to life that you can see through your eyes,
But you just brush it away like it's nothing at all,
Im watching you helplessly in a never ending fall,
What I woulden't do just to hold you in my arms,
Save you frum the darkness and all of its harm,
This lonliness that seeps off your soul is unstopable,
I love you so much but your just simply untouchable.
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XxNights_ChildxX
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2004-09-30 15:04:40]
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Re: Untouchable
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:40:13 PM AEST
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| You had about to had made me cry. but you made me smile because it was a good write about your feelings. I wish I knew what to say to help you reach him. just be there for him and love him. and listen. good write again.sandy |
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Re: Untouchable
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by poetmarie on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:51:50 PM AEST
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| The way you wrote this makes the reader see how deep the feelings are here. It's focused and well written. Very touching; sad but lovely. |
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