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deep in ground
Contributed by
babe-grl
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Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 02:02:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Deep in ground
There she was buried…deep down in the ground…
Where none can find her…
She was buried while she was still alive…
But she couldn’t move…she felt like she was paralyzed…
She could hear what was happening around her…
But couldn’t speak…she couldn’t move a thing in her body…
Not a leg not an arm…no nothing…
She was trying so hard to scream…but even a beep didn’t come out from her…
Then…she was finally able to open her eyes…witch was already covered with dust…
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Re: deep in ground
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by poetmarie on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:59:01 PM AEST
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| Hmmmm. Very interesting, it's - paralyzing. Good write. |
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Re: deep in ground
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by inoc on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 04:07:25 PM AEST
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a bit scarey....
deep underground...
cheers!~ |
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