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Come Love
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 01:15:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Come Love
Illuminate the shadows
That encroach upon my heart once again
Take Me
Back into your embrace
And to the place I always should have been
Just Reach
Through the dreams and schemes
That have distorted visions of the man within
Hold Tight
For the demons of the night
Will try to wrest me back into their pen
Let Not
The path I’m on continue
This never-ending desperate downward spin
Lift Me
High above the pyre
That threatens to consume my weathered skin
Come Love
Restore to me
The grace I knew back then
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2004-09-30 13:15:30]
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Re: Come Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 01:59:45 PM AEST
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The demons will never wrest you back in their pen,
totally again!
This is structured very well and reads like a classic love poem breathtaking.
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Re: Come Love
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by Archie on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 02:34:17 PM AEST
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| This is an amazing write. Great job. |
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Re: Come Love
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:16:46 PM AEST
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Naz,
A wonderful poem, and again your power with words make the read so potent. A theme of love. A theme of victom who presents with a need to be rescued, saved, protected .... let me .... restore me...
A very beautiful and for me a somewhat psychological write. Sorry about that ... old habits die hard.
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Re: Come Love
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:24:30 PM AEST
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Enchanting till the very end!! My dearest Naz, this is simply exquisite! Absolute perfection! A break from all things is always good. I took one too, lol... Beautiful words, excellent rhythm, I could almost dance to it... Such longing, for someone to embrace you and love you forever. I know this feeling, my friend. Boy, do I know it.
"Come Love
Restore to me
The grace I knew back then"
Oh, I love this!! You are truly talented, cheri amour! Keep 'em comin'! Delicious. I will definitely come back to this and read again, and again, until I am fully satisfyed. Thank you for the beguiling read! Pen on, sweet poet! Eternally yours,
Votre Fleur douce |
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Re: Come Love
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by pixie on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:31:10 PM AEST
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a wonderful write, filled with hope *hugs* nice to see you writing something other than dark poems,(even though I do love your darker writes) nice to know you feel happier,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Come Love
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:53:19 PM AEST
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Wow, man.
You really put together
an awesome poem here.
I love what you're saying
in this.
Groovy.
--Mothy |
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Re: Come Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 05:08:47 PM AEST
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Nice change of pace!!!!
Very masterful and well done.
You can slip into this style any time you want,
great job! |
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Re: Come Love
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:24:35 PM AEST
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My dear friend Naz, would you believe it has taken me this long to recover from my crash. I lost everything....had to redo my YPDC list everything......and thanking you so much for being so faithful and commenting even when I couldn't get to you!
I've been feeling the same as your poem here......a little bored with my style, theme, the whole ball of yarn.
I really appreciated this style Naz......a pause gives one time to contemplate, and ponder over another's writings and this was excellent in form and verse!
It's always very refreshing to read your poetry. I can relate to it in so many ways.....and I like the trip you take me on with you!
Excellent!!
Warm Poetic Hugs
consue
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Re: Come Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:48:17 PM AEST
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Sweet, beautiful rapture. I guess I spoke too soon in the PM.
Hadn't seen this one yet. This was amazing Naz. Stunning and glorious!
~Breezy
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Re: Come Love
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:44:56 PM AEST
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| Ok..ready or not here I come....lol. this I can handle and not have bad dreams..just dreams... how bout you go into my special section and read DARTS???? See if its manly...??? |
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Re: Come Love
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by katyqueen35 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:51:27 AM AEST
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Wow i have to say this is a master piece.
I am like in AWWWW. |
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Re: Come Love
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by valentine on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:40:05 PM AEST
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This slinks across the page . . decadent and elegant . . It evokes my pulsating heart and a word does not go unheard.
"Come Love
Restore to me
The grace I knew back then"
~ That line reaches me like no other. I relate to it so well.
~ Valentine ~
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