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better to be 'dumb'?
Contributed by
ZooYork_Chick
on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 12:24:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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shout louder than your words
scream louder than your heart
work and write faster and tell it quicker than the pulsing of you chest
let blazing fingers set fires, let whole rooms burst into flames,
and then our bridges will burn, our cities will fall and we will all return to this ash,
and so im counting the days, before our loses are weighed
and we turn in our grave.
we could have been saved?
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2004-09-30 12:24:34]
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Re: better to be 'dumb'?
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by Remy on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 12:28:28 PM AEST
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i love writing like this, so many things to read into... it captivates the reader into contemplation! great write!! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: better to be 'dumb'?
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 01:13:19 AM AEST
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| I agree with Remy, very captivating! I love it! |
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Re: better to be 'dumb'?
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:48:03 PM AEST
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| I do write faster than the pounding of my heart then I have to wait 24 freaking hours to post the panicked crappola...but I digress. Loved the poem. |
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