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Moon & Stars
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:05:44 AM in AEST
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Love is always better in the moonlight,
It with the stars illuminates the sky so bright,
Gentle & wonderful silver shades,
Embracing a love that will never fade.
The soft glow from the earth’s moon,
Makes things special as they bloom,
As love unfolds underneath the nights canopy,
I can show exactly how much you mean to me.
I draw you near for our first kiss,
Feels to me like such heavenly bliss,
The twinkling stars light up like a beacon,
Our moonlit love will never weaken.
I stop & stare right into you,
Our hearts stuck together with passion’s glue
Total silence speaks such volumes,
As we breathe in each other’s sexual fumes.
Entwined we lay under the moon & the stars,
Feeling able to reach out & touch Mars,
As I turn to you, you do the same,
Tonight our love will hold no blame.
I feel you tremble as we softly touch,
I have always wanted you so much,
This night is ours & ours alone,
Right next to you is where I call home.
Copyright ©
pixie
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Re: Moon & Stars
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by Remy on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:08:37 AM AEST
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| breathtaking... |
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Re: Moon & Stars
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:36:18 AM AEST
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OH BRAVO pixie!!
Great flow in this one and the rhyme is well done.
I love the feel of this one. It eminates a warm love and sensuality. |
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Re: Moon & Stars
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 01:53:34 PM AEST
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moonlight is just the most romantic thing.
For people who don't know about the feelings the Heavens can produce maybe they should read this poem! nice work pixie.
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Re: Moon & Stars
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 02:00:01 PM AEST
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I love that Pixie, it speaks volumes. Great flow, and happiness.
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Re: Moon & Stars
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by shelby on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 05:31:40 PM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: Moon & Stars
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 01:46:12 PM AEST
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ohhhh so pretty, excellent, loving write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Moon & Stars
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:38:17 AM AEST
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Oh Splendid Pixie Girl........
Your moon light love gave me a whirl!!!
It was romantic and slightly tidipatted. I love like yours is very rare, and only comes once in a lifetime I sure.......hang onto to it very tight, and keep it alive with all your might!!!
Lovely
love and hugs
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