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A Desire Within
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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an undying desire within me,
teases and tantalizes,
stripping me of any inhibtion.
delicate senses are revealed, senses un known even to myself...
body pleading and burning, passion uncontrollably surging...
yearning-to touch
to explore
needing-to taste
to feed
ashing-to give
to pleasure
anxious-to take
and be taken
heated bodies united
writhing
trembling
thriving
submissive eyes
filled with emotion
pounding hearts
driven by devotion...
a desire within
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ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-12 08:00:00]
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Re: A Desire Within
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 08:24:28 AM AEST
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Your poetry is pretty
I enjoy reading it, it's very
creative and imaginative
Thanks for sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: A Desire Within
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by princesspurty on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 09:28:14 AM AEST
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| wow! sounds like how I feel towards mine! beautiful! |
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Re: A Desire Within
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:53:32 AM AEST
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Dear me Candice!
Did you need a cold shower after writing this or what!
The feeling here is sooooo intense, it's excellent when you've someone to feel like this with.
Very well written
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: A Desire Within
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:06:47 AM AEST
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Dean, I'm glad you liked it. And and yes I did need a cold shower after writing this one, but I would have much rather been with him. Oh, and just so you know, this is not even the best one like this that I have written. I have many more that are much better.
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