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12 Minute Teeth
Contributed by
macmcgovern
on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:01:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Dreamed I went,
to One Hour Choppers,
made me a impression,
put it in the hopper,
took me 12 minutes,
to get some teeth,
made me feel like,
a low down thief,
paying only fifty dollars,
for them there teeth,
until I sat me down,
and started to eat,
discovered I wouldn't,
have to chew for a week,
thank the Lord for them,
12 minute teeth
I awoke,
feeling real weak,
knowing full well,
I hadn't lost any teeth,
only evidence left
a heck of a whopper,
too much drink,
not enough stopper
hope I never need, a One Hour Chopper
Mac
July 2004
Copyright ©
macmcgovern
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2004-09-29 20:01:36]
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Re: 12 Minute Teeth
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:20:33 PM AEST
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| This is funny, lol. I hope you don't ever need them either! Keep those toofers brushed well! |
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Re: 12 Minute Teeth
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:52:55 AM AEST
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| a good laugh well written and thanks for sharing |
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Re: 12 Minute Teeth
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by Ronald on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:26:11 AM AEST
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| kinda of humourous. Like it. You have a great sense of humour. |
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