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The Sun
Contributed by
macmcgovern
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Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 07:56:46 PM in AEST
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NaturePoetry
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I see you twice on a nice day
in the morn, again at last ray
warm and tender, cold away
birds robustly singing as they sway
horses' contentedly eating hay
children laughing while they play
golden tendrils mark the way
shimmering light upon the bay
lovers embrace, happy and gay
never a thought but come what may
your light a miracle, here to stay
no disappointment, you know the way
you'll fade to night, but won't go away
I'll see you tomorrow, if it's like today
Mac
September 2004
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macmcgovern
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2004-09-29 19:56:46]
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Re: The Sun
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:21:14 PM AEST
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| great write. =] |
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Re: The Sun
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:24:17 PM AEST
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Yes, it is sad for those stuck inside office buildings all day long and rarely see the sun. The office i had had no window and I would have to walk down a long corridor just to find a window to look out and see the sun and clouds and sky. Too many live like that now. Sad really.
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Re: The Sun
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:45:51 AM AEST
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| This lightend (spelling?) my heart like a ray of sunshine thanks for sharing |
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