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A Day Dream

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I close my eyes and I see
the beauty of your smile shining at me.
The touch of your hand against my face
stroking softly as we embrace.
Shadows from the fire, and sparkles form the wine,
all my life, I've never felt so fine.
You whisper in my ears, your deepest desire,
as our sensual temperatures get even higher.
Our bodies unite and begin to melt,
such a pleasure we've never felt.
We lay on the balcony to make our love.
As the sky and the moon, watch from above.
As we both peak, and our hot passion comes to an end.
Our bodies lay still...no more energy to lend.
I open my eyes to find the lie,
that once again I've day dreamt, of you and I.




Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-11-12 07:30:00]
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Re: A Day Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 07:50:03 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful
and so heartfelt , it gives
a beautiful vision, Thanks
for sharing this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: A Day Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 01:30:59 PM AEST
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Wow...this is beautiful...
Jenni


Re: A Day Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:16:03 AM AEST
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Phwaarrr, it's getting hot in here, so take off all your..... No Dean let's not go there!
I like the way you hot-day-dream Candice, and I see what you mean again.
But better? I'd say different, but equally as excellent with the feeling that you manage to create!
Keep 'em coming(and that wasn't meant to sound like a pun either! because that would be rude, hehehe)

With love
Dean:-)


Re: A Day Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:30:24 AM AEST
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Dean, I am glad that you like it. But I have some that I do not share that are way better. Those are just too personal to share.;) And I wouldn't have taken that as pun, but you just had to say something. Actually who I am kidding? I would have taken it as a pun because my mind atomatically goes that way. I can't help that.
ShadowsCloud


Re: A Day Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:46:19 AM AEST
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Sorry, I can't help it either, I must learn to get my mind out of the gutter!
You must share, it's only me that's allowed to have private things!!
Only kidding again Candice.

With love
Dean;-)


Re: A Day Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:55:27 AM AEST
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Dean, I doubt we will ever learn to get our minds out of the gutter. But it's not so bad that way, I think that is makes life more fun. The only reason that those other poems are private, also the only reason they are better, is that they are written directly from personal experences.
ShadowsCloud


Re: A Day Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 10:04:57 AM AEST
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Oh, I think it's better to keep them private then Candice!
And I hope I'm fun sometimes at least, I can get completely submerged in the gutter, when the time's right of course!

With love
Dean:-)


Re: A Day Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 10:05:25 AM AEST
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Oh, I think it's better to keep them private then Candice!
And I hope I'm fun sometimes at least, I can get completely submerged in the gutter, when the time's right of course!

With love
Dean:-)


Re: A Day Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 10:15:21 AM AEST
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Dean, that is why I keep them private. I don't even have them it the same place as I do my other poems. They have their own special place.
I think that you are fun. And I can also get completely submerged in the gutter at times as well.
ShadowsCloud




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