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Ruined
Contributed by
brokenbylove130
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Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 02:20:49 PM in AEST
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youve ruined me
stripped me of my ability to live
to laugh
to love another
it is you in my waking moments
just after ive opened my eyes
i think of you.
your face floods my minds eye
it haunts me,
for once, i loved that face
i still do but now
it only brings me bitersweet memories.
i tried to give you my heart
my soul
then just as quickly as it began
you ended it
ripping away at my heart.
i hope that now you see
that now you understand
how much youve ruined me.
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brokenbylove130
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2004-09-29 14:20:49]
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Re: Ruined
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by screwup on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 02:24:49 PM AEST
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awesome poem... believe me... i know how this is... great write...
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Re: Ruined
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 02:27:46 PM AEST
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| What an awesome poem packed full of emotion which makes it so great. I admire your wonderful writing style and want to Thnak You for sharing yourself and your great poetry with all of us. Please have a peek at some of mine and leave a message. Your friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: Ruined
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 02:34:13 PM AEST
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That was definitely full of anger and bitterness. The feelings are quite easy to condone, though, and the poem was very depictive of a broken heart. Interesting to me how the deepest hurt leads to the greatest anger. Strange how the two are so directly related. It is the same for me. Good poem.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Ruined
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by darkplaidbabe on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 02:48:00 PM AEST
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awesome write! i can definitely see whats happening to you, i went throught his recently also. I think we should all become lasbians and teach men a lesson damnit! PM me anytime you wanna talk!
~lovelovelovelove~
*Brynna aka Sweet Kreamy or Magenta* |
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Re: Ruined
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:46:44 PM AEST
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well what your reaction is, is not his fault, but yours. what he actually did is his fault, but what you do with it, is yours. that is why people who murder are convicted, not the ones who instigated it for one reason or another. that is why abusers are counseled and locked up and not those "who made them abuse them".
but i can understand this write very well. what i said above goes out the window in my head when someone such as that happens, and i blame whoever. sooner or later i remember and blame myself for how i took it.
well the present and future is yours to change, so you might love another etc or not. but it would be your fault, because you couldnt bring yourself to move on from it, to learn from this. just think of it like this now with the experience you have, it wont happen again. |
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