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The Promise

Contributed by shanarah on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 11:35:23 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Dancing visions of you
run through my mind
praying for peace
thats so devine
Your innocent eyes
beg gently for more
I will pray and protect you
as I have before
three little girls
have gone adrift
I would do anything
to give you a lift
all this turmoil
in a large amount
just try your best
it will always count
a chance to see
your precious smile
lets me know
living is worthwhile
the creation of your
souls, God has made
Id give mine up
for yours in a trade
We have to stick together
it wont be long
soon we can shout with
a laughter and song
beating of your hearts
make low soothing sounds
three daughters I have
my love for you abounds
Our trying times
and gloomy tears
will bring our life together
for many years

Copyright © shanarah ... [ 2004-09-29 11:35:23]
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Re: The Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 12:09:56 PM AEST
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This poem is created so beautifully and I love the way you have this talent of drawing your reader right into you. I want to Thank You for sharing yourself and your poetry with all of us. Please have a peek at some of mine and leave a comment. Your friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o)

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