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Darkest Hour
Contributed by
screwup
on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 11:30:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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tears moving fast
lost in scilence
I take my fate
and hold it
in the palm of my hand
in its mirror reflection
I see this girl looking up at me
I don't know who it is
but I hate her
I keep thinking that I don't want to be her
tears streaming down her cheeks
and the two faces become one
as she drags the blade
agianst the grain
of her soft skin
just wanting this life to end
she is so hurt
so torn up inside
she trusted his word
now she has lived a lie
she was inocent
but now forced to die
faded memories now corse through her head
as the blood turns into dropplets of red
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screwup
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2004-09-29 11:30:36]
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Re: Darkest Hour
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 12:36:17 PM AEST
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| Aww you poor thing.so much emotion and sadness in your write.If you ever need to talk pm me ok ?hugs |
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Re: Darkest Hour
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 01:35:23 PM AEST
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a very moving write , I hope that your pian will one day subside *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Darkest Hour
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 02:12:27 PM AEST
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Hey Babe...
Good write... u've put all ur emotion in that one... just keep getting it out in the open... I know sometimes it's hard!
Take care...
Love ya...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Darkest Hour
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:29:43 PM AEST
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| words so believable, but so easily said without action. |
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Re: Darkest Hour
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:31:58 PM AEST
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| deep ..good poem |
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