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For The Love Of Suicide
Contributed by
screwup
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Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 11:19:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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she struggles in the rain
images flash through her mind
as she drowns alone in her pain
everyone passes her by
alone she has lived
and alone she will die
he looks in her eyes
and fades away
this will be the last time she cries
tears stain paths down her cheeks
she cannot go on
she is to weak
she is trapped in lonelyness
in the wake of a dream
she looks down
to welcome the little red stream
she puts the blade to her wrist
letting the blood drip down
the pain in her letting go
as she slips away and drowns
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Re: For The Love Of Suicide
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 01:33:36 PM AEST
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quite a gentle suicide poem,I really liked this one, but am sorry that if she is you in the poem, that you feel this way *hugs*
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: For The Love Of Suicide
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 02:22:49 PM AEST
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Hey Beautiful...
Another suicide poem... but this one is quite good... a lot of raw emotion there... but yet it is gentle... was this one written during Jeanne?
Take care... be talking to u...
love ya...
~Donna~ |
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Re: For The Love Of Suicide
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:32:10 PM AEST
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| great write. one moment decides the rest of your life... |
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Re: For The Love Of Suicide
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:35:48 PM AEST
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| great poem |
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