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Attempting Explanation
Contributed by
nomie
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Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 07:56:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This song never ends,
The sound devoid of fading,
The lyrics, never-ending sentences,
Of how I love you,
This ocean is so deep,
Its substructure never found,
The water, an inexplicable mass,
Like how I love you,
This world is so huge,
Life constantly circulating,
Now in a state of completeness,
Because I love you.
This love has no language,
Words lack definition,
Yet a list runs on for miles,
Of why I love you.
Copyright ©
nomie
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2004-09-29 07:56:03]
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Re: Attempting Explanation
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:06:50 AM AEST
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Ah, the throes of love. You have described it well.
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Re: Attempting Explanation
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:46:17 AM AEST
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I especially liked the author's comment you put out there. And the poem rang true in what love is...inexplicable!
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Re: Attempting Explanation
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:33:57 PM AEST
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what a beautiful poem.... hugs n' love nessa
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