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Of the light
Contributed by
Tanmaya
on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 07:46:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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They belong to fields of morning light where
laughter floats with the blue shield of the skies.
They belong to full moons sailing on battle-songs,
to adventures leading into the hearts of the winds.
They belong to blades of swords that shimmer
over the dust of battles, over the lores of ages.
They belong to anthems of glory sung for heroes,
to hands that hold the shining waters of truth.
They belong to promises tied on armours of light
and the pure dream that shapes the eye of courage.
They belong to golden whispers of wisdom’s voice,
they belong to the eternal dawn that will come again.
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2004-09-29 07:46:21]
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Re: Of the light
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:50:22 AM AEST
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The last stanza was great. Warriors of the Light?!?! Great. I like how it has such a strong, yet a bit concealed, message. Nice work.
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Re: Of the light
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 02:14:34 PM AEST
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| beautiful imagery |
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Re: Of the light
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:12:42 PM AEST
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this is absolutely gorgeous, i do so muchly love your poetry tanmaya:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Of the light
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 02:44:02 AM AEST
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Amen!
This is as perfect a poem as I have come across in many of these swift-passing days. Utterly enchanting all through, and inspiring. This has to be one of my favorites of yours (though picking those would be difficult!).
Vanya ná!
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Re: Of the light
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 06:27:25 PM AEST
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"They belong to promises tied on armours of light"
I loved that line. I don't know why, but I loved it.
Take care.
David |
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