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I wish
Contributed by
Archie
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Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 05:02:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I wish that we all could be treated equal
inspite of our different beliefs
It is a shame that we are enemies
when the road that we're on is the same
If I have hurt you I say I'm sorry
I'll try to fix the mistakes I have made
but to avoid me in light of ouf differance
Is to build a wall that separates
I am reaching out my hand to you
I will not beg you to take it
I will be your friend
If you want me to
But I can't if you won't take this chance
All through these battles
I've watched the responses
and attitudes come to a head
The swinging of fists
has me cringing in silence
wiping away hopeful tears
I hope that peace will come
through honest intentions
I hope we can spur
our dividing contentions
And be the true friends that we wanted to be
when we first started to dream
I am reaching my hand out to you
I can not beg you to take it
I know it is a gift that's to be earned
so I take this chance for you
I am reaching my hand out to you
I will not beg you to take it
I'll be your friend if you want me to
But I can't if you don't take this chance
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-09-29 05:02:11]
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Re: I wish
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:39:55 AM AEST
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My hand is always out to you, in friendship. Blessings to you.
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Re: I wish
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 11:41:05 AM AEST
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You could not have written this any more nicer than you have.
Holding out an olive branch.... your hand for frienship beautiful words in this poem Archie
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: I wish
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by Alovinmann on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 04:52:40 PM AEST
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| Beautiful offer of peace in a troubled relationship WELL DONE |
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Re: I wish
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 05:33:12 PM AEST
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so well written archie, so heartfelt, ill always take your hand friend:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I wish
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:52:25 PM AEST
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| great write. "But I can't if you don't take this chance" i loved that verse. |
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Re: I wish
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 01:49:43 AM AEST
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Beautiful work Archie, very well written.
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Re: I wish
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 05:17:17 PM AEST
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Awwww how very beautiful!!!! I'm so sorry I missed all this before..... You are very talented and one of my fav poets here... Thank you for sharing your heart...
Jenni |
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