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We're Better Off This Way
Contributed by
lanna047
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:22:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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it wasn't that long ago
that if I had been asked
if I would take you back
my answer wouldn't be masked
I wouldn't have hesitated
to say that I would
but that was before I saw
where in the matter you stood
I see now what's in your heart
or the lack of what's there
and so I can't put my finger on
any reason for me to care
you decided to turn your back
and then tried to pretend
but naively I believed your promise
that you'd always be a friend
you left, and stranded me cold
out in the middle of nowhere
I struggled to find my way back
and away from that nightmare
your heart was changed
and now, so has mine
I have finally figured out
where I should draw the line
the damage can't be undone
don't pretend it will abate
we've become far too distant
and now it is too late
I can't do this anymore
there's nothing left to say
we should stop kidding ourselves
we're better off this way
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lanna047
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Re: We're Better Off This Way
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by free2you on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:31:28 PM AEST
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| For someone who wasn't that interested in poetry, you do very well. I enjoyed this a lot. |
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Re: We're Better Off This Way
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:51:25 PM AEST
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| i'm sitting here in a still calm that was beautiful...great write |
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Re: We're Better Off This Way
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:15:23 PM AEST
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| Realization. What a wonderful and sad word. I know how you feel. Great write.Thanks.............Mike |
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Re: We're Better Off This Way
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:20:06 PM AEST
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| brilliant write. |
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