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Before I Die
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:43:46 PM in AEST
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Before I Die
I taste the blood
I see the light
All before I die
The darkness taken in
The lies believed
That led to sin
The scars of words written
Upon my heart and flesh
The pain of the first cuts
The abuse taken in
Drugs used to forget
Cutting till there's nothing left
All because of what you did
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Re: Before I Die
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:49:44 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
Hang in there.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Before I Die
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by monophobic on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:58:52 PM AEST
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| i think ur a great girl, but the truth of the matter is, you took the drugs, and you cut urself, nobody else, its all mental.....i know im one to talk....haha but great poem! |
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Re: Before I Die
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by spyke_420 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:23:38 PM AEST
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Really intense and deep...I love it.... I know that people must say this offten but I can relate with you a lot....in what your saying and the stuff you'v done.... come cheak out so
me of mine if you like....
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Re: Before I Die
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 12:09:39 AM AEST
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| well written, hang in there, things do get better, unless you join the navy! |
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Re: Before I Die
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by Nicole_Rahaman on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 12:10:28 AM AEST
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Sad, but lovely write
Nicole |
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Re: Before I Die
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:55:46 AM AEST
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| well written but truly sad and u deserve better |
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Re: Before I Die
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:04:28 PM AEST
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| This is full of emotion. I hope things will be better in the near future. Hang in there. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Before I Die
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:25:02 PM AEST
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this emanates loneliness, my heart goes out to you, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Before I Die
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by Flipped_out on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 06:55:47 AM AEST
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Really liked this...a lot, extremely moving
But I hope it is not my kitten killing that has affected you...(joke)
Kelly x |
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Re: Before I Die
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:01:09 PM AEST
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How tragic.........simply cannot empathize enough to put myself in your place, but if ever there is anything I can do to help, please don't hestiate.........I'll be here for you whenever!
Warm hugs and much warm love
consue |
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Re: Before I Die
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 09:27:10 PM AEST
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Dark & Deep :)
But very good :) |
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Re: Before I Die
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 04:13:36 AM AEST
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| great poem. it's very powerful. |
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Re: Before I Die
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by the_fallen on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:12:52 AM AEST
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| theres alot of meaning in this poem. I really love it. Very powerful. |
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Re: Before I Die
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:17:42 PM AEST
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Very powerful, I love it.
Spazzo |
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Re: Before I Die
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 12:33:04 PM AEST
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Wow! Very powerful. What a great write.
Blu |
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Re: Before I Die
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:37:01 AM AEST
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Ouch that hurt me... VERY POWERFUL I LIke THaT YoU makE YOU're ReAdErz FeEL The PaiN
AmaZing WrITe
HeNo UnKNOwN BuTtErfLY |
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Re: Before I Die
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:41:26 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed the flow. Your sentiments of |
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Re: Before I Die
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:04:02 AM AEST
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| wow, that's a really great poem! i can feel the emotions from it, you did a great job like always ^-^ |
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