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Who Are You?
Contributed by
mylastwords
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:34:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You're pushing me away,
I'm left out in the cold...
What's going on with you?
Coz I don't know you anymore...
You said you still love me,
But do you really want to?
Or is it just too hard for you...
Too hard for you to handle?
Do I expect too much,
A bit of love and caring?
Or do you just not want to...
Not want to show you care...?
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Re: Who Are You?
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:42:09 PM AEST
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well written and heartfelt:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Who Are You?
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by monophobic on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:44:34 PM AEST
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| in my opinion when people back off like whoever seems to be doing so in this poem....then they need to back off....break away....maybe not for good....but just for now becuase maybe they need some time alone to deal with issues |
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Re: Who Are You?
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by VonDutchChick08 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:34:20 AM AEST
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This is an awesome poem. Your expressions of emotion were beautiful. Nice write...keep it up.
-Ash |
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