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The Beauty in Pain
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:45:56 PM in AEST
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These lies; so obscurely etched into my face
hidden by a mask so cleverly placed
This pain; so skillfully painted into my eyes
concealed by the power of my own demise
This hurt; so carefully carved into my hands
cloaked only by the humility that withstands
This agony; so indelibly drawn into my tears
Only to be erased by the conquering of my fears
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2004-09-28 20:45:56]
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Re: The Beauty in Pain
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by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:50:03 PM AEST
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Very powerful words of truth. Simple, yet says so very much. Nicely done, wonderful write.
Laurie |
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Re: The Beauty in Pain
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 05:48:22 AM AEST
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Deep and strong words.
Well-expressed. |
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Re: The Beauty in Pain
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:11:26 PM AEST
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This hurt; so carefully carved into my hands
cloaked only by the humility that withstands
this makes me feel like i am dead and walking the land
its very sad but i hope you can conquer your fears |
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