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Addicted To Life
Contributed by
lost_word
on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Watching him fade away
with every breath he takes
Another brain cell down the drain
Another wasted day
Your face is so unclear to me
when will i see you again
I watch you make us suffer, suffer, suffer
As you chug another, and another, and another
The "Box of Shame" is gone, gone, gone
and so are you, you, you
He stands up, but cant walk around
Loud defining echo's as he "Hits the Ground"
Leaving his soul behind
for another day of.....
NOTHING
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lost_word
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2002-11-12 00:00:00]
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Re: Addicted To Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 12:37:45 AM AEST
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This is so sad, it has
a strong message behind it
I really enjoyed reading this
i look forward to reading more
of your poetry, Thank you for
sharing this one it was really
a good poem.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Addicted To Life
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 08:46:41 PM AEST
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| this is really good, keep it up! |
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