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Anger Management In Its Most Extreme
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:01:50 PM in AEST
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We were up late last night
Starting fist fights with beaten pillows
Anger management in its most extreme
We bruised our knuckles
On eachothers temples
To be unconcious was to be victorious
Our faces bled through every possible source
Bloody rivers, forming tributaries
Dripping and staining our shirts
Vision correction
With connection from my fist
You start to weep
Realizing your defeat
Wrapped your arms around my neck
In a brotherly embrace
I had to make you listen one way
I think I have your attention...
Copyright ©
eyesxcriedxout1989
... [
2004-09-28 20:01:50]
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Re: Anger Management In Its Most Extreme
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by xafflictedx on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:20:56 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderful poem. Some times getting someone too listen means lashing out. Bravo. |
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Re: Anger Management In Its Most Extreme
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:56:16 PM AEST
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| shut-up mandrew!!! i will say who gets a pat on the back and it is certainly mason who should get one for his wonderful poem about violence. kudos mason on this bloody and horrific tale of blood and horror.lol, i'm joshin' around, though it was an excellent poem. |
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Re: Anger Management In Its Most Extreme
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:09:33 PM AEST
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I really like your
narrative style.
--Mothy |
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