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Dream
Contributed by
luna_mica
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 04:55:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I don't wanna pinch myself,
If this is just a dream.
I don't wanna wake,
'Cause it's just you and me.
Alone, without a care,
And with our hearts entwined.
You take my hand in yours,
And I take yours in mine.
I look into your eyes
And whisper "I love you".
And then you lean on me,
And say, "I love you too".
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2004-09-28 16:55:48]
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Re: Dream
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 05:53:50 AM AEST
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Very sweet.
The lines flow well.
Has a very warm and nice feel to it.
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Re: Dream
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by shattered_heart on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 03:05:35 PM AEST
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Iv'e had so many of those dreams, and I know I never want to wake up from those either! Good write.
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