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The red dress
Contributed by
recklessguy
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:35:51 PM in AEST
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mmmm dreams takin me away
too the little place
in the background where music played
little red dress made just for you
few beers and a couple of shots
dance floor round we all twirled
red dress following each curve
I sat back watching my sexy truckin girl
table full of roses
fragrant matching your perfume
heads turned all round us
from all around the room
just a thought distant memory
of that night now past
of that little red dress
ohhhhh how those memories last
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Re: The red dress
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:39:12 PM AEST
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Very beautifull scene as I can see u both dancing with the flow.
Beautifull!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The red dress
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:43:32 PM AEST
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ohhhh... this one is beautiful......... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The red dress
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by free2you on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:56:33 PM AEST
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It's perfect...'cept for the misuse of the word too...
too the little place I know, nobody asked..but that too..is for, also.."she was there too. Your phrase should be using only one o...but like you said..nobody asked so I'll go on my way now..Brilliant, lovely poem..I really liked it...bye. |
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Re: The red dress
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 05:02:00 PM AEST
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| great write =] |
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Re: The red dress
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 05:41:54 PM AEST
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my cheeks blush as red as that dress thxs for this makes me smile
sexy truckin girl
Michelle |
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Re: The red dress
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by AngelEmmA on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 06:14:43 PM AEST
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| lovely! just lovely! :) |
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Re: The red dress
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by maggot on
Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 09:17:18 AM AEST
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great write loved it
@->-->--
~maggot~ |
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