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Please Hold Me Tight
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:17:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Please my darling hold me tight,
I don’t want to be alone tonight,
Take my so very deep into you,
Whisper sweet words that are true.
I need you to hold my heart,
Please prevent it from falling apart,
Caress my bruised & broken soul,
Shelter my shivering body from the cold.
I need to feel love & your devotion,
Lets put everything back in slow motion,
Tell me as you look into my teary eyes,
That if you lost me you would surely die.
Each time we row a piece of me is lost,
Raw emotion comes with a hefty cost,
As I weep please wipe my tears away,
Tell me that with me you’ll forever stay.
As you touch me I feel myself drift,
Feel like you have given me a gift,
Your words of love ring into my dreams,
Your love is mending my busted seams.
I am like that of a delicate rose,
Heart filled with sad & emotional prose,
I’m fragile like a cut china plate,
Shoulders buckled under too much weight.
My darling, please hold me close,
Tell me I’m the thing that means the most,
That without me your soul wouldn’t be complete,
That if you lost me the world will fall at your feet
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pixie
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2004-09-28 11:17:51]
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Re: Please Hold Me Tight
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:31:54 AM AEST
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awww...... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Please Hold Me Tight
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:52:47 PM AEST
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A beautiful description of the depth of your emotion. How often do so many women feel exactly like this and how seldom do they really express it? Well done.
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Re: Please Hold Me Tight
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 01:22:24 PM AEST
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Awww... great write... Pixie... Such raw emotion used thruout... fantastic write... I can feel the longing... the craving for love...
Well written...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Please Hold Me Tight
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 11:54:56 PM AEST
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Very beautifull, romantic, touching write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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