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Baptism
Contributed by
oldernotwiser
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:50:20 AM in AEST
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I remember the moment
you turned the boat
from waterfall to moon
the moment my heart
dropped anchor, wanted
to drown in that place
where excrutiating light hit
bottomlessness. That lake
filled with everything
you longed to know.
How can I convince you
by taking me there
you would teach me
to save myself.
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2004-09-28 09:50:20]
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Re: Baptism
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:05:19 AM AEST
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Wow! I am astounded. This is incredibly good stuff! Are you new here? How have I missed incredible writes like this? I'm Stitch, and I am in awe of your poetry.
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Re: Baptism
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:24:06 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written and with such pure feeling, cool poem keep em coming. |
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Re: Baptism
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by Lee on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:22:06 PM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:
Stunning imagery, and wonderful topic!
The meaning of this poem is a little hidden, but the search may be for searching of the divine.
Jolly Good Show! |
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Re: Baptism
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by brew on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:52:45 PM AEST
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| Your work discloses a heart filled with pain, yet , it was filled with joy, at one point. |
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