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This Last Tear
Contributed by
zeppchic420
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Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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This last tear I cry tonight is the last tear I cry for you. No more heartache, no more thoughts of losing you again.
This last whisper I long for you to hear to know though I stil love you, never again will I wast my nights hurting because you're not there.
This smile on my face is the last smile for you. To think of the good times we shared only brings back the times you poured aching all over my heart.
The tear you see contains all we had, all that we shared, all the years I spent longing, and every second it took for you to shatter my hope.
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2002-11-11 18:00:00]
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Re: This Last Tear
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by OreO on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 07:04:18 PM AEST
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This is so sad yet full
of inspiration at the same
time, it's full of pain and very
creative as well, i enjoyed
reading this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: This Last Tear
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 09:02:34 PM AEST
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Sad but has a strong will behind it. Awesome, really effective write.
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Re: This Last Tear
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by viola on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 07:45:48 PM AEST
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| heartbreaking but hopeful. good thoughts go your way. |
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