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Another Way
Contributed by
Lee
on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:08:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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It is time to go away
It is time to find another way.
They stammer for fear of the hammer
To touch on them, the villagers,
By the lady giant
Giantess
She would not stomp pn
The birth certificate of a
Venus fly trap
Indigenous landmarks
Beady eyes comprise
Nonchalant, they haunt
If while attempting to count the hairs on your head
You were to find spiders nesting hydras
And if while attempting to build ant hills instead of dogs
We were attracted to the fire hydrants
Copyright ©
Lee
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2004-09-28 07:08:54]
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Re: Another Way
(User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:26:33 AM AEST
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I read and re read this and want to comment-
a great poem and...
...I have an image of a dog peeing on an fire hydrant....
I bet I am totally wrong?
cheers!~ |
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Re: Another Way
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by Lee on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:37:42 AM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
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Actually, you pretty much captured part of the image of the last *verse* except it is humans who are at the fire hydrants instead of dogs. An example of an exchange in roles, although I didn't explain what human characteristic the dogs took on. It would mostly likely be holding the leash. |
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Re: Another Way
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by Lee on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:38:24 AM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:
Actually, you pretty much captured part of the image of the last *verse* except it is humans who are at the fire hydrants instead of dogs. An example of an exchange in roles, although I didn't explain what human characteristic the dogs took on. It would mostly likely be holding the leash. |
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