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Feeling Unable & Unstable
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 06:43:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My mind feels set to crack,
Once I’ve gone I’ll never come back,
I’ll be lost in the land of the insane,
Never to return to you again.
I can’t go on feeling so unstable,
To cope with everyday life I am unable,
I sometimes cry myself to sleep,
From under the covers I’m too scared to peep.
I could hear things in my room last night,
That made me chill & filled me with fright,
I hoped that the next day I wouldn’t wake,
No more of this hurt I can take.
Can’t keep hold onto any of my thoughts,
I feel manic & very fraught,
Things spinning round & round,
Feel like my feet don’t touch the ground.
I don’t know how to get a grip,
Just feel like I’m about to flip,
Sink right under into a Psychotic land,
I no longer feel reality in my hand.
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pixie
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2004-09-28 06:43:53]
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Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable
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by Lee on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:00:04 AM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
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Verrry interesting imagery.
Have a read of my poem Encouraging Them Meteorite Children and comment on it, if'n you will. I'd 'ppreciate it muchly.
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Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:01:44 AM AEST
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my thoughts are with you Pixie
*hug*
keep writing your poetry
your brilliant style shines
cheers!~ |
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Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable
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by blueeyedevil13 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:51:36 AM AEST
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Great poem. I've always had problems with rhyming but you pulled it off nicely. I could really connect with your poem. You should keep writing. Very emtional, thank you for posting this. It's good know that I'm not alone in this battle.
Avril |
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Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable
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by unforgiven on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:56:56 AM AEST
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i really like this poem. i love how when i read it, i can feel all the different emotions u were feeling when u wrote it. great imagery and depth.
i would love if u could comment on one of my poems just to see what u thought....i'm kind of new to this and would appreciate the feedback from u. |
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Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable
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by Dorian on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:35:07 AM AEST
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Sorry 4 yor pain pixie i'm here 4 u if u need a friend 2 scream at . . . Dorian : (
((((((((4 pixie))))))))) |
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Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:51:05 AM AEST
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| Your emotions run deep in this Hang in there it will get better things always do! I keep telling myself that! Good luck Christina |
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Re: Feeling Unable & Unstable
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:04:17 AM AEST
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your creative mind is working overtime, the mark of a true poetess, great write, big hugs, lotsa love, and a shared bag of chippies, nessa
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