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nostalgic sentiment
Contributed by
sunnyrainbows
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Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 01:05:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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i wish the words would flow
like like tears to describe
nostalgic sentiment.
memories held close to my heart
shattered like a mirror
a reflection of myself
gone from you.
i know you reminice
the world turns
but everything stays still
when will the hurt stray.
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sunnyrainbows
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2004-09-28 01:05:38]
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Re: nostalgic sentiment
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by shanarah on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 02:46:52 AM AEST
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very powerful and deep, youve wrapped it up
nicely in just a few lines.
take care
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Re: nostalgic sentiment
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by reprobate on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:55:34 PM AEST
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you need to straighten it out a little but it's good. i like it.
thanks for sharing. |
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