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I Met My Girl
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:36:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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MY HEART
WILL
GO ON!!!!!
SultryRose's Signatures
" I Met My Girl "
I went out with the guy’s just the other night
I saw a girl looking so fine, she was outta sight
I moved myself closer and I heard her say
Take me on the dance floor, let our bodies sway
She smiled at me with her eyes as if to speak
Baby there is something bout you makin me weak
Wrap your arms around me and squeeze real tight
I had this feeling I would meet you this fine Friday night
My heart was beating faster as we danced away
Really feeling some romance as our bodies sway
She moved her face closer and gave me a kiss
I never thought my evening would end like this
I whispered softly in her ear, I really like you
She whispered back and said to me, I know you do
The song was over as we went to grab a seat
I moved in closer, kissed her, and man it was sweet
The sparks we felt ignited with intensity
Now a couple in love we will always be
I’m glad I went with the guy’s the other night
I Met my Girl, I love her and our futures bright!!!!!
By James L. McHenry
Copyright ©2004 James L. McHenry
Copyright ©2004 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
© 2004 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright ©2004 Heartfelt TM
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Re: I Met My Girl
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 02:19:07 AM AEST
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congratulations on finding your girl
I love the poem it's brilliant
*wondering why I am the only one that has placed a comment*
you deserve more.....heaps
cheers!~ |
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Re: I Met My Girl
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by shanarah on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 02:25:03 AM AEST
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great form, upbeat and cheerful.
take care,
shanarah |
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Re: I Met My Girl
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 06:29:16 AM AEST
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a great write, very bright and a very happy ending *hugs* I am glad that you got your girl :)
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: I Met My Girl
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by Dorian on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:52:58 AM AEST
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| touching poem best of luck 2 u both . . .Dorian : ) |
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Re: I Met My Girl
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by Nicole_Rahaman on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 12:22:59 AM AEST
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Lovely and upbeat poem
Best of luck to you both
Thank you for your comment
Nicole |
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Re: I Met My Girl
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by blackholesun on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:17:18 AM AEST
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| wow! cool im happy for you james!new love is so sweet!treasure the peace and romance you 2 will share,it faded in my relationship i wish i would of loved it more while it lasted. |
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