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Where Crystals Convalesce

Contributed by EternitysLyre on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Where everything is as it should and all is as it may
An evening, silent, simple, stood beneath a trembling day
Because the sunset shatters dawn and pine leaves cannot pray
Although the sunlit shards are strong steel splinters split each ray

But as the daylight crashes on and washes with the waves
The lunar beach draws tides undrawn and sanguine cinders slave
For balmy shores bring nevermore and fathoms friendly waves
And every sand stands small as it receives not what it gave

Caressed cheeks of crystal weeks bear witness to resolve
Beloved keepsakes strewn in heaps count crimson cares bled gray
Reflections of a shaky sun in dewdrop moons dissolve
Wherever winds will wear white wings
A sunspun whisper stays:


"Twinkle, twinkle, little star
Hiow I dreamed for things afar
Violet streaks of nightlong scars
Twinkle, twinkle, where you are."




Copyright © EternitysLyre ... [ 2004-09-27 22:47:18]
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Re: Where Crystals Convalesce (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:52:19 AM AEST
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I absolutely loved this.
I would say this is one of the best poems I have read lately.

'An evening, silent, simple, stood beneath a trembling day'
'And every sand stands small as it receives not what it gave'
Brilliant...deep and inspired.




Re: Where Crystals Convalesce (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 05:29:27 PM AEST
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I've come to love your affinity for aliteration, especially in lines such as "Although the sunlit shards are strong steel splinters split each ray." Also, the changing of rhyme scheme from stanza to stanza gives this a unique feel. I definitely want to be around when you complete this, as it already is something extremely special.

Obliterated by a speeding bus,
-V.S.




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