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Blade
Contributed by
poetic_ire
on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:14:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Shut from the light
Blocked from the world
The voices in her head
screaming for release
The shine of a blade
The slice through her flesh
Scarlet droplets on porcelain skin
The hole in her heart
deep and desolate
No one to share her pain
A heavy load lightened by
each cut of her flesh
Each droplet shed
lightens her heart for
cuts will heal but the
hole in her heart will not
One can fill it, but
the one is denied passage
to this little crooked angel
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Re: Blade
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:57:46 PM AEST
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| hrm, what is it with the pattern of angels? im glad you see that nothing physical solves anything emotional. there is more to fill a hole than just one... excellent write. |
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Re: Blade
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by luna_mica on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 11:16:22 PM AEST
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| thats me. except im a guy. very empathetic poem. i loved it. finally someone can put it into nice words. |
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Re: Blade
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:33:18 AM AEST
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| awesome, this is so me |
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Re: Blade
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by KurdtBeantheWIKKED on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:43:22 PM AEST
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This is really good. But you can't really understand until you've been there. and I have.
I have to say this is absolutly perfect |
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