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keep fighting
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shepdog1972
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Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
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keep fighting
by shepdog 1972 on Sep 27 [print] [edit]
(21 views) Author's Last Login: 2 minutes ago
In Category: Hope, Genre: Personal.
I looked to the sky tonight,like a million times before
But tomight im gonna tell you the sky was unexplored,
the glistening stars told a true tale, the moon never lies
And what im about to tell you my friends still makes me cry
As i watched the stars dance and tumble in the light,
I soon felt faint and lost all my sight, i then felt limp and had no control.My body was gone and so was my sole.I floated away like a cool
summers wind, life had not just started this was the end.
I tried so hard, I tried to break free then i felt something grab a hold of me, I turned around and seen a bright light i knew right then this was the night.
I begged and cried I love you my lord then a voice said, JOHN you
must pick up your sword and fight the things that should not be.
Fight them all and i will se you free. I cited, I will I will my
Lord and then I woke up, but i still had my sword
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Re: keep fighting
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 02:11:19 PM AEST
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| This was a really good poem about that,I'm glad you pulled through! Great job! Christina |
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Re: keep fighting
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by OreO on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 02:39:36 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes
this is so sad, yet inspirational at
the same time, it says alot.
Thank you for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: keep fighting
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by shepdog1972 on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 03:17:39 PM AEST
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| thanks oreo....i am glad that you like it |
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