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One Day All Your Poems Will Be Happy
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:01:58 PM in AEST
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That is the message that he sent to me,
Promising me that one day I’ll feel free,
I wish that it would happen soon,
I can’t live in this life of doom & gloom.
I long for the sunshine to finally return,
Instead of feeling this terrible burn,
Pangs of loneliness that never eases,
I feel like living is tearing me to pieces.
I want to be strong enough for us both,
But I am in the dust I’m beginning to choke,
Can’t hold up my head any longer,
I am praying that I will feel stronger.
Please if you’re out there please listen,
There is a part of soul & it’s missing,
It has gotten lost in the fog of my illness,
To find it again I am trying my best.
But when I get up again my legs go weak,
I can’t find the voice that allows me to speak,
My insides are torn & hang threadbare,
I really need to feel there’s someone there.
Show me the light & I will follow,
Deep in self pity I am having a wallow,
But I can’t help the way that I feel,
Please show me what is in my head & what is real.
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pixie
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2004-09-27 13:01:58]
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Re: One Day All Your Poems Will Be Happy
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by theMoth on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:46:04 PM AEST
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Your writing just gets better and better.
This is very plainspoken but so sincere
and really communicates.
My Best to you, Pixie.
--Mothy |
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Re: One Day All Your Poems Will Be Happy
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:48:12 PM AEST
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| :( *hugs* i dunno what to say |
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Re: One Day All Your Poems Will Be Happy
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:54:02 PM AEST
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Awwww pixie.
I know what you mean about that.
I hope you feel better girl.Very good and emotional write.
hugs |
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Re: One Day All Your Poems Will Be Happy
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by loopylou on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 02:01:18 PM AEST
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| people have days like this. they normally pass. i hope yours do. you described your pain very well. it was a good write |
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Re: One Day All Your Poems Will Be Happy
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by Dorian on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 02:44:37 PM AEST
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this may not mean much coming form me but
here's a little light, i know u not, or see u or even
hear u, but your writting posesses the quality of a
beautiful and caring human being . . . Dorian : )
(((((4 pixie))))) |
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Re: One Day All Your Poems Will Be Happy
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by emystar on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:24:39 PM AEST
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Be patient with yourself.
I know personally these thoughts-n-feeling don't just go away.
Medication from your Dr. can help.
Take it easy on yourself. No one wants to feel that way. I know from experience. He's right one day all your poems will be happy.
God can and will help u thru all this.
Joy commeth in the morning.
Hang in there fiend, your inner peace will come.
luv, huggs, happy,
emy |
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Re: One Day All Your Poems Will Be Happy
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:22:10 PM AEST
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beautifully written, and hey hey you know im here for you always:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: One Day All Your Poems Will Be Happy
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by tractorbabe on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:37:31 PM AEST
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| wow amazin this is a wonderfully writen poem i enjoyed reading it very much thanks keep writin |
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