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Midnight
Contributed by
SuicideParty
on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:44:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My life in my hands
Staring up at the sky
Counting stars as they fall
Quiet sobs tell a lie
Live a lie, welcome death
Love your suffering, lose your breath
Lost in pain on my knees
Whispered prayers, murmured pleas
Hardened hearts cast a glow
Frozen time, they won’t know
People rise, people fall
Feeble stands, rulers crawl
Always just, never fair
Hidden eyes, souls threadbare
Hope alive, if barely shown
Always mocking, shame unknown
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Re: Midnight
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by pixie on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:07:05 PM AEST
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a very sad write...it was written very well.
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Midnight
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by tractorbabe on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:41:07 PM AEST
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| amazing ! extreamly well ritten!!! i love your poem. the way every thing flowed together perfeclty ur very talented keep writting |
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