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BUTTERFLY AWAY!
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:50:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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"BUTTERFLY AWAY!"
Softly swooping butterflies on a string.
Floating in midair, over land and stream.
No worries, not even a care....ambling.
Hues gliding silently from a rainbow's beam.
Butterfly Away, Butterfly Away,
Lifted by the wind's whispered skyway.
Gently gliding, evenly swaying to and fro.....
Early morn's warmth felt day-glo
Butterfly wings fluttering, cautiously,
At peace with a quiet breeze wee windy.
Harmony, tranquility with the universe.
Melodic tones of nature's songs verse by verse.
Butterfly Away, Butterfly Away,
Please don't land upon the troubled earth
Keep flying skyward heaven's high, I pray.
Into His kind loving embrace take berth.
Created especially
for my dear friend,
with warm love,
LovingCritters
ConSue
Sept. 27, 2004
"If my new friend was an American Indian,
I would name her "Butterfly Wings" because
she is so gentle, delicate and kind....has always
been an inspiration to me to write beautiful poetry.
Just like a delicate butterfly wing, if touched, some
will rub off on you, and this she has done to me too!"
*Beautiful Butterfly Smiles*
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2004-09-27 08:50:12]
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Re: BUTTERFLY AWAY!
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by pixie on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:53:16 AM AEST
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awwwww this is so beautiful Connie, a very delicate and precious write,
pixie xx |
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Re: BUTTERFLY AWAY!
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:09:15 AM AEST
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Light airy beautiful poem...
Shari |
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Re: BUTTERFLY AWAY!
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by inoc on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:10:38 AM AEST
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I adore the picture and the poem
thanks for submitting it it's a treat
ditto with that name lol
cheers!~ |
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Re: BUTTERFLY AWAY!
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 11:08:54 AM AEST
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| This poem is for me isn't it? No, I'm just kidding. Critters, this is truly amazing and beautiful.I could feel myself being surrounded by butterflies while I was reading this. What a beautiful picture to go along with a wonderful poem. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: BUTTERFLY AWAY!
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by Stitch on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:12:15 PM AEST
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Consue,
The butterfly is one of my favorite creatures---so beautiful and delicate, they seem to meander, but their wanderings serve important purposes, and they are strong enough to survive the battering winds. BRAVO! I really like this.
Stitch |
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Re: BUTTERFLY AWAY!
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:07:03 PM AEST
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ohhhh!!! this is very pretty connie!!! hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: BUTTERFLY AWAY!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:35:21 PM AEST
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| Beautiful I just loved this one you are so great with words!Christina |
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Re: BUTTERFLY AWAY!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:45:47 AM AEST
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Consue,
There is something about this one that is diffrent from the rest of yours. Most everything you write has some uplifting quality to it, as does this, however in addition there is an almost frivilous happiness to this that makes it even more of a joy to read.
The seemingly aimless meanderings of the butterfly are in my opinion, beautiful as is your poetic heart.
Thank you for sharing this. |
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