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That Corrigated Cubby!!!

Contributed by inoc on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:19:43 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

He digs silently out in the scrub
each day he slogs in the heat until it's all dug
a huge hole in the middle of nowhere
not many knew about it and he didn't really care
except three little girls ages five, seven and nine
they enjoyed watching him dig he was respected at that time
finally the corrigated iron was placed on the top
the girls got excited and climbed down the ladder with a little hop
but He said no not all together one at a time
so they all waited at the top in their age line
hurry up they would say I want to have a turn
slowly they realised it wasn't fun as they would learn
their time down there was a regretable experience
no one knew about it they kept it a secret for all existance
these children are now grown up to be a wife and a mother
this man they trusted was their own step brother
no one knew or never could see
they didn't want to break their parents glee
what a tragety to happen to girls ever so young
now these women are having trouble trusting anyone

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-09-27 07:19:43]
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Re: That Corrigated Cubby!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:59:58 AM AEST
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My God how can something so cold have the right to live, to do something so dam awful, Geeze I dont even know what to say this is so heart wrenching and there isnt even word in my vocabulary on how descide the sadness I feel, those poor gisrls, there innocence shattered stolen by somethey trusted.........

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